Word length; This paper was 14 pages long, with a font size 12 throughout it. That being the case this paper met the word count requirement of 3,000 words. Grade 4.
Punctuation; MLA which was the required style format was used for this paper. Grade 4.
Work Cited, Signal Phrases; Proper work cited page including all information needed to check up on cites provided. We found a signal phrase on page 2, “In 2009, the state Auditor recognized that the Auditory has worked on coming up to recommendations by legislative analyst’s office report”. Grade 4.
Thesis; “ High-speed rail is necessary for California to improve the abysmal economy of California, revolutionize the way we travel in the United States mega-regions, and stop a spending frenzy on more roadways as oil continues to run out”. The student argues this thesis by mentioning the following statement “It has been extremely frustrating seeing this project being planned. The media has been stacked against high-speed rail.” Grade 4.
Building a Case; This paper is well organized, the student does not jump around from argument to argument. The information throughout the paper is well put together making it an easy understanding read. Grade 4.
Credible sources; Student used more than ten credible sources. Using articles that the state of California released helped build his case as well as credibility. Grade 4.
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